Wound Inside Red
You tell me your love follows me,it is not real, a thousand pages of lies.Vows given, you kissed and burnedin crying smiles of wedding guests.My heart must pause to breathe,without your promise.It is...
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Hi Maggie,What a very nice reply, how kind of you.Thank you, for your wonderful words to my poem.Thank you, Maggie
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Hi Jim,No critter would treat me like this.He would be too afraid of me.I am all of five-feet tall....LOLThank you, Jim, for your very kind words to my poem.Thanks......Jim....!
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Jen:"Walking away " from "Wound Inside Red"means you will soon find a new kaliedoscope.
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Jenna -You penned the internal 'red' so vividly in this write.The closure is outstanding -maryann
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Hi Gro,Walking away from "Wound inside red"means I will find a new Kaliedoscope.I had to stop and remember what is a kaliedoscope. I believe it isa box you look into and as you turnit the colors...
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Hi MaryAnn,Thank you, so very much.What a beautiful reply to my poem.I appreciate very much your kind words.Thank you, MaryAnn
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Hi Gro,Thank you, for you kind and helpful words,they mean more than you know.Thanks.....Gro....!
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Jenna,This had an arresting rawness that was very appropriate. Powerful.Mark
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You've got some really great lines in this poem, like pretty super. This is a great line for example -- It is glitter dust falling away, this is a great line too --Our love disappeared, as stars...
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Hi Mark,Thank you, Mark, for your kind words to my poem.I appreciate them very much.Thank you, Mark
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Jen,This reads as a personal declaration of independence.The title makes me think 'hurt and anger'They certainly do go hand in hand!sarah
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Hi Sarah,Thank you, for your very kind word to my poem.I appreciate them very much.Angry and hurt do go together.As most of my poems this one started one wayand made a left turn or...
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Jenna the message not your writing, I would never insult anyones writing, I felt badly for you in this situation, I thought it was ghastly, so sorry for that misunderstanding, indeed no harm was even...
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I'm very sorry I've had some very bad days, I in no way ever wanted to betray someone who took interest in stuff I wrote as you apparently had, to be honest, I tried to hard I guess, cuz I wanted to...
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Jenna, sometimes recognizing painful love is the first step to getting away from it and healing from it. This is a tough one but written so well! Great work!Jared
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